To the right is my original image which I presented in my show and tell session at the end of last term, and to the left is my final image to be printed in my groups photo zine and showcased on our website. I altered skin tone in her parting of her hair and the tone on her neck also, as this was highlighted to me as something which lowered the production value of my images in that session. 

I tried to even out the background tones as you could easily see a shadow, even though this hasn't been completely eliminated it isn't as obvious when you look at the image and doesn't immediately stand out to the viewer. 

The images are cropped to show both side by side, I plan to use the full scale images in my final work.